I walk into a big place
I see the bright sky
I was walking
The sun was coming out from the sky
It was amazing
As I placed my own two feet on the soft sand, I felt small waves of water break on my feet.
It was when the wind blow on my face
It was like something pushing away
The sun was setting down
I really felt like I am there. Great poem!
ReplyDeletethanks i know that feeling usha
ReplyDeleteso you were embrasing the beauty so much that before you knew it, the sun has already set. thats what im getting here.
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ReplyDeletedoes that mean im right??
ReplyDeletethese are amazing u should make a book of ur poems
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