Friday, December 10, 2010

Unknown Poem

Seeing you have been apart of me,
It was all about joy
And good memories,
But when you left
I was miserable
heart broken
Nothing changed at all
But there was a time
When I knew you were here,
For me,
It will be better,
to know you will be there
where we could figure out things
between us
That would work,
I have been waiting to talk
To Make things right

12 comments:

  1. so its like the internal voice of your loved one telling you what to do when things are going wrong?

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  2. elena: i am the voice telling the story about things going wrong

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  3. O o, i dont get it :-/ then who is the person thats apart of you? ohh ok

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  4. my cousin is the person who is apart from me

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  5. yea i do this the one that is college remember??

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  6. OH! yeah i remeber. is very sweet how close you are to her. my family is desperated by money issues.

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  7. that sucks man and should i show this poem to my cousin or not?

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  8. definatly, it would be very nice

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  9. this poem comes from ur heart is it very nice

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